Overall I am very pleased with the feedback I have received and for which I am mightily relieved. Some suggestions about further editing on the set - which I will fully take on board. Some other suggestions about how I might have approached this assignment, which I found interesting and illuminating.
The most surprising was my tutors reaction to what I felt were the least interesting set i.e. the Alice Marshall Hall in that it was felt that they were the most interesting. Maybe this is because I "know" the AMH better than the other buildings and this speaks to a current conversation on the OCA Flickr site about "knowing" the subject you set out to photograph. Interesting things to think about.....
I was given encouraging comments about my writing - which I will continue to develop and I have had an article accepted for publication later this year.
More photographers to study, more things to consider, as I move to assignment four very encouraged and optimistic.